Poet’s workshop
It’s the best when I’m being me
When I’m home alone and I hear weird noises
It’s the worst
When I fail in something I’m good at
It’s the worst
When I loose, either a game or in life
It’s the worst
When I’m mad at my self or others
It’s the worst
When I’m watching other people suffer
It’s the worst
Being in hospitals
It’s the worst
When I’m missing people I love
It’s the worst
Feeling alone in a crowd
It’s the worst
Being unwanted
Being unwanted
It’s the worst
Discovering a new world
It’s the best
Learning something new
It’s the best
Napping with my dog
Laughing with my friends
It’s the best
Listening to music
Being in silence
It’s the best
Being among friends
Being all by my self
It’s the best
Being happy, being unhappy
Being angry, being glad
Simply just being alive
This is the best for me
good poem but we are missing some imagery.
SvarSletDavid og Camilla:
SvarSletFlow/Rhythm: Got a good flow. First there comes a line and then a sentence with "That's the ..."
Looks a lot like Charles Bukowski's.
Rhyme: No rhyme.
Remember:
good progress in the poem.
SvarSletwe think it is a good poem.
jonas lasse
2x kristoffer
SvarSletthere is a good message and flow in the poem. Good poem!
God poem, and it is possible to relate to your own life.
SvarSlet