The best is when life turns out my way
Every story has an end
It’s the worst
To loose a fight
It’s the worst
To give up
It’s the worst
I need you
It’s the worst
Easy come, easy go
It’s the worst
To fall though
It’s the worst
In life every end is a new beginning
That’s the best
To succeed
That’s the best
To live out a dream
That’s the best
To laugh out loud
That’s the best
Eyes full of love
That’s the best
A sunny day,
A smiley friend,
A nice dream,
A successful run,
A winning day,
Ben and jerry’s
That is the best for me!
Nice poem! you satisfies the requirements Jesper had set up.
SvarSletDavid og Camilla:
SvarSletFlow/Rhythm: There is a good flow in the poem and it seems a bit like Charles Bukowski's
Rhyme: Few rhyme.
Remember:
Anne/Sebastian: You clearly get the message.
SvarSletgood structure in the poem and it has a nice rhytm!
SvarSletjonas lasse
Dorte and Boel:
SvarSlet- we do not think the best way to set up a poem is to write that is the best and so on all the time.
- otherwise it is good :)