The best is when the skies are blue and the birds are crying
Scars and wounds
It is the worst
Broken bones and blood
It is the worst
Rain and snow
It is the worst
Dark skies and grumpy people
It is the worst
Losing a games and races
It is the worst
Bad luck in a casino
It is the worst
In school all day
It is the worst
Like the 4th lesson
It is the worst
With family and friends
It s the best
Sitting and talking
It is the best
With family and friends
It is the best
Eating a delicious meal
It is the best
In the forest
It is the best
With my bike
It is the best
On vacation in the mountains
It is the best
With my bike and friends
It is the best
The world in harmony
It is the best
Good times and good memories
It is the best for me.
BULLE!!!!!!
SvarSletgood poem.
David og Camilla:
SvarSletFlow/Rhythm: Good flow in the stanza's
Rhyme: No rhyme.
Remember:
it is a very thoughtful poem, very niice.
SvarSletjonas lasse
2x Kristoffer
SvarSletin general, it's fine poem. maybe, we miss a change in structure.
We like the kursive strift :-)!
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