The worst and the best
The worst is when I have to go to school at the morning
The worst is when I have homework
The worst is when I have done my assignments
The worst is when I puke when I’m too drunk
But the worst of everything is bad sex
The best is having spare time
The best is having break
The best is summer
The best I when I go to the gym
It’s almost as good as good sex
The title is wrong and your last line in your last stanza is not That is the best for me. But beside that we think that it is a okay poem but you mabye sould have spend a little more time at it.
SvarSletDavid og Camilla:
SvarSletFlow/Rhythm: There is no flow in the poem.
Rhyme: No rhyme.
Remember:We remember it because it is funny and a bit strange.
Not so creative, but it's still funny :)
SvarSletAnne og Sam.
Dorte and Boel:
SvarSlet- It is a bit weird and we can not really relate it.
- You maybe should have spend more time on it.
But otherwise it is good.