The best is when the worst not exist
1. The best is summer
Early summer
This summer
Last summer
Just summer time
That’s the best
2. Then comes the winter
The worst is winter
Early winter
This winter
Last winter
Just winter time
That’s the worst
3. The best is to fall in love
Be in love
Make love
To have a love life
But Love is blind
That’s the best
4. The worst is wickedness
Evil people
Bad dreams
It’s like a vicious circle
Meaningless
That’s the worst
5. The worst is not like the best
The best arise in summer
Because in summer arise a lot of love between people
Love is like floating on a cloud
So what is summer and love?
That is the best for me.
definently some inspiration from the poem "the worst and the best" and it is cool.
SvarSletjonas, lasse
David og Camilla:
SvarSletFlow/Rhythm: Good flow. The stanza's look like each other and there are repeating words.
Rhyme: No rhyme.
Remember: We remember it because we can all relate to it.
2 x Kristoffer:
SvarSletThere is a good structure and flow. Good poem.
good flow :)
SvarSlet