The best is when life feels good
The start of a new day is important,
knowing some are waiting for you,
the feeling of being loved,
the person next to me have to be Dorte,
that is the best for me.
Waiting at the bus,
no body near you,
you are all alone,
cold, as a freezer
That is the worst for me.
no body near you,
you are all alone,
cold, as a freezer
That is the worst for me.
Weekend, vacation, time to relax,
home alone or with family,
silence to think, to clear you mind,
that is the best for me.
home alone or with family,
silence to think, to clear you mind,
that is the best for me.
The feeling of failing,
become embarrassed,
look like a hippo,
that is the worst for me.
become embarrassed,
look like a hippo,
that is the worst for me.
Eating good food, chill out with friends,
go crazy to a party, hope it never ends,
with smaller cousins I play spy,
feel the happiness after exercise,
soccer is the best, it makes me feel good,
oh year just as my childhood,
watching sport all day long,
listen to a heartbreaking song.
That is the best for me.
go crazy to a party, hope it never ends,
with smaller cousins I play spy,
feel the happiness after exercise,
soccer is the best, it makes me feel good,
oh year just as my childhood,
watching sport all day long,
listen to a heartbreaking song.
That is the best for me.
Denne kommentar er fjernet af forfatteren.
SvarSletit is funny. playing with the words.
SvarSletDavid og Camilla:
SvarSletFlow/Rhythm: A bit flow, but more like short story.
Rhyme: No rhyme.
Remember: We remember it because it is funny and we can relate it to our every day life.
2 x Kristoffer:
SvarSletFirst of all, we think it's a good poem. There is a certain progress in it and it contains good themes.