mandag den 24. januar 2011

Poem # 21

Mondays
nightmares
dilemmas
bad weather
dishonesty
losing
rats
celery
it’s the worst.

knowing the responsibility
passing the ball perfectly
the field is mine
that’s the best.

willpower defeating talent
the sun is shining
the feeling of succeeding
that’s the best

the orange feeling
music playing kindly
life
that’s the best

to be loved
walking on air
my heart beating like a galloping horse
the crackle of love
kissing my flower
that’s the best for me

5 kommentarer:

  1. Anne/sebastian:
    A different poem, but with a clear message.

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  2. We like the last stanza ! With a great metaphor: Walking on air !
    Venlig hilsen Anne og Sam :D

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  3. Dorte and Boel:
    - Relate:ohh year.
    - Message:You need to know the person, some baggrund stof, to find the message.

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  4. We can relate the poem to football and love!!

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