The best is when you look me in your eyes
Knowing you’re right
Looking in your eyes devoid of fright
To make a decision without any fear
Like the rain falling like a flood of tears
Looking at the person and know it’s the right
Just like the instant you looked at me for the first time
That is the best for me
Thinking back at the past
The time which flying by too fast
The hearts quarreling searching
Is worse than the shrillest rose
When dreams tries to take the place of loving you
That is the worst for me
Knowing someone watching over you is the best
All of the reasons to keep on believing are the worst
Being with the one you love is the best is the best
But knowing someone loves you is the worst
Saying goodbye
Is the worst
But knowing you are in a better place
That is the best for me.
The rhyming makes the poem flow when you read it. Love is an important theme. - Mat & Sof
SvarSletIt's a good poem, because of the fact that it is rhyming :-)!
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Anne og Onkel Sam
Anne/Sebastian: It's a good love poem, with a decent rhythm and flow to it.
SvarSletDorte and Boel:
SvarSletThere is a message because of the love. You can relate is overall because of the love. It has a good flow and ending rhymes. Sometimes the stanzas get to long.
Bad title...!!
SvarSletBecause og the rhyme there is flow in the poem, and we can as always relate to the poem since it is about love....
Great poem with the theme love
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