The best is when
You embrace a person and it feels right
You have a feeling which is hard to describe
You embrace a person and it feels right
You have a feeling which is hard to describe
The worst is when
You loose a person who remains in your heart
You have to detach you from the longings and commence a new start.
You loose a person who remains in your heart
You have to detach you from the longings and commence a new start.
The best is when
You wake in the morning with a hand on your waist
You realize that you have a pretty good taste
You realize that you have a pretty good taste
The worst is when
You disappoint a person who cares about you
You know that a real friend would never do
You disappoint a person who cares about you
You know that a real friend would never do
The best is when
You receive a smile which have an impact on you
You receive a smile which have an impact on you
You know you love the person and he loves you to
The worst is when
You time after time hear yourself say
You can’t get this feeling to fade away.
You can’t get this feeling to fade away.
But in the end the feeling of being free
That’s the best for me
Really nice poem, a very good flow, it has a continuous theme - Mat og Sof
SvarSletIt's the best poem !!!!!!
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Dorte and Boel:
SvarSletWE LOVE IT! It is so cute.
Good flow.
Anne/Sebastian: A good poem a lot of flow and rhythm! There is a lot of good points, that everybody can relate to.
SvarSletNce flow and ofcause we can relate it to the wellknown theme of love:)
SvarSlet- Patrick Ehlers
Cathrine ravn
SvarSletvery nice poem
SvarSletDavid og Camilla:
SvarSletFlow/Rhythm: There is a good flow somewhere. The stanza's looks like each other, it makes it easy and clear to read.
Rhyme: No rhyme.
Remember: Remember it because of it's structure and we can relate us to it.
It is a really good poem!!!