The worst and the best
The best is when
You feel the excitement of something
You aren’t entirely comfortable doing
The worst is when
You eat food with weird consistency
You can’t seem to finish chewing
The best is when
You experience silence between friends
You have had from back in the days
The worst is when
You keep remembering bad situations
You somehow can’t erase
The best is when
You find yourself in a lovely therapy-session
You spend with the favorite music of yours
The worst is when
You see that time is running so fast
You get anxious about doing your chores
The best is when
You are able to sit and have a chat where
You talk with family in front of the fireplace
The worst is when
You accomplish difficult missions but
You never do something that seems to amaze
The best is when
You have the ability of getting high
You never seemed to get from smoking
The worst is when
You are trying to be taking seriously but somehow
You realize that people think you’re joking
But all together
Being alive
That’s the best for me
It is good, because you can relate your self to the poem :-D!
SvarSletKnus Anne og Sam
Dorte and Boel:
SvarSletGood ending.
- We can relate to it.
- FLow is okay somewhere.
Anne/Sebastian: It's long poem with a good message.
SvarSletOkay flow in the poem, but it's too boring!!!!
SvarSletCathrine and Patrick - and it's okay sine there is a pattern struture.
SvarSletDavid og Camilla:
SvarSletFlow/Rhythm: There is a good flow somewhere. The stanza's looks like each other, it makes it easy and clear to read.
Rhyme: No rhyme.
Remember: Remember it because of it's structure and we can relate us to it.