The best is when it’s summer
Monday morning
It’s the worst
Working at 7 A.M
It’s the worst
Endless lectures
It’s the worst
Homework at Saturday evening
The road is fading away
Headaches like bombs
It’s the worst
The sun looking my way
That’s the best
The taste of chocolate
That’s the best
The smell of fresh air
that’s the best
that’s the best
In front of a fireplace
Snow is falling
A soft blanket around me
That’s the best
Finished assignments
That’s the best
Skiing down the hill
That’s the best
Flying trough the sky
That’s the best
Walking along the beach
Music on it’s maximum
Laughing until I cry
That’s the best
For me
Good flow, easy to read
SvarSletWhat you are writing is right!
SvarSletDorte and Boel:
SvarSletWe can relate it because most of the things are something we all have experienced.
- Good flow, it is easy to read.
Anne/Sebastian: It is a good poem with a good flow. It is easy to read.
SvarSletEasy poem, so the person, who made it, has not spend more than 10 min...
SvarSletDavid og Camilla:
SvarSletFlow/Rhythm: There is a good flow in the poem.
Rhyme: No rhymes.
Remember: it is good writing and we can relate us to it.
good flow. good progess and a good relation.
SvarSletjonas, lasse