The Best, and the Worst
The best thing is when the dog barks at the girl next door
The best thing is when ive heard it all befor
The best thing is when i have never done it before
The best thing is when you can't deny,
The best thing is when I believe I can fly,
The best thing is when I love that you hate,
The best thing is when I got the balls to watt
The worst thing is when you look me in the eyes,
The worst thing is you know all the lies,
The worst thing is I don't know your mail,
The worst thing is I just broke my nail,
The worst thing is when I get fired from work,
The worst thing is, That I'm half turk’
Great rhyme.
SvarSletAnne/Sebastian: Good rhythm because it rhymes.
SvarSletBefore*
SvarSletWait*
dbbl. Before = not so good.
Dorte and Boel:
SvarSlet- It is a bit annoying that every stanzes starts with: the best is when or the worst is when.. It makes it hard to read.
But otherwise we can relate some of the thing to our everyday life.
I agree with Dorte and Boel!!!
SvarSlet- Patrick and Cathrine
nice rhymes but you are missing the right title and the the last stanza.
SvarSletDavid og Camilla:
SvarSletRhyme: some rhymes.
Remember: We remember it because it is funny.
funny poem, good rhymes.
SvarSletjonas, lasse