Shopping all day
Getting new clothes,
Jewelry, shoes and scarf
That’s the best
Over drafted credit cart
Red-hot numbers
On the account
That’s the worst
Getting tanned
Feeling the heat
On the beach
That’s the best
Getting scorched
Feeling the sticky
Sand all over
That’s the worst
Feeling the rhythm
Like fast pumping heartbeats
Filling my soul
That’s the best
Getting out of time
While performing in public
That’s the worst
When pressure is worst
And feelings is down
Knowing that love all around
Carry you through
still smiling to you
That’s the best for me
Sam can totally relate to stanza 2 first line.
SvarSletAnne og Sam :D
Anne/Sebastian: VERY NICE!
SvarSletDorte and Boel:
SvarSlet- We can relate it.
- good flow. It is good that the good and the worst things are togehter in one stanza.
There is progress in the poem, and the flow is okay, but the struture is weird.
SvarSletgood form in the stanzas. good flow.
SvarSletjonas, lasse