The best and the worst
The best is when life is good
Life is good, when people are living
People are living, when they are happy
They are happy, when life is good
The worst is when life sucks
Life sucks, when people losing
People losing, when they aren’t talking
When they aren’t talking, life sucks
The best is friends who always are there fore you
Friends who always are there fore you, is good friends
Good friends, finds you interesting every time at the day
That friend is a friend who always is there fore you
The worst is eating bad food
Eating bad food, when you really want a Big Mac
When you really want a Big Mac, drive after one
Drive after one, when you are eating bad food
The best and the worst is hard to describe
It is hard to descried, when you love the thing
When you love the thing, is it right
It is right, when it is hard to describe.
Few grammatic errors, and a bit spelling errors. Nice rythm, rhyme, and composition.
SvarSletgood personal poem with good structure.
SvarSletbur you are having the wrong title and you are missing the right line in the last stanza.
David og Camilla:
SvarSletFlow/Rhythm: There is a good flow in the poem.
Rhyme: No rhyme.
Remember:It is something we can relate to.
Good poem.
SvarSletBut it's not nice to call a person a thing!!!
Anne og Sam ;-)
we can both relate to the poem. that is good.
SvarSletjonas lasse
Dorte and Boel:
SvarSletIt is good.
It is a nice way to set op the poem.
- Good flow and we can relate.
Anne/Sebastian: Interesting set up. We can relate to the poem.
SvarSlet